The second draft should reach 1700-word minimum, be multi modal (including images/graphs), include footnotes/endnotes, and utilize in-text citations. Also end with your bibliography (which does not contribute to the 1700-word count).
Just revise the paper you wrote for me last time. The Historical Conversations Project Draft #1 is uploaded below. For each evidence you provided in the paper last time, please give specific in-text citations. For example, “This requires employers to involve them in setting working hours, wages and sticking to the plan. It is illegal to unfairly dismiss nannies without their respective wages or making unaccounted deductions (Wu, 2016)” you wrote should have a in-text citation by it. This time please use images, graphs, diagrams, and statistics as evidences as well to make the usage of evidences become multi-modal.
I will upload all sources that you probably will need. The primary sources should be used as texts from three articles. You can get graphical and secondary sources from these two articles https://www.ilo.org/wcmsp5/groups/public/@dgreport”¦. and https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/13621″¦
I also upload two sample essays to help you follow the format.
Also take a look of the Evaluative Criteria of the paper. Please focus on the section “Evidence, Information Literacy” when you are revising the paper.