DMM649 Emergency Healthcare Management Presentation

I want someone to edit it the PPT to what my professor said. This is what my professor said:
The assignment was clearly stated in the syllabus. You were supposed to provide an:
Overview of the keys to a successful healthcare emergency management program. What does it mean to be successful in healthcare emergency management? Include examples of successful programs and why they’re successful.
You did not do that. You provided an overview of overview of Emergency Department (Healthcare). You missed the mark.
To clarify, you are to research a successful hospital or healthcare system emergency management program. Some of this research may already be completed as part of your final case study. Why is a particular hospital successful? Additionally, I want you to tell me what YOU think it means to have a successful emergency management program. Imagine yourself and Emergency Preparedness Manager for a hospital. How do you quantify success in your program?
Tips for a good PowerPoint presentation: There is an example/tutorial in how to create an effective PowerPoint presentation that can be found under the Course Documents tab in BB. This will be particularly useful to students who have not had experience with these presentations in the past, but may also help others refine their skills. You will be graded not only on the content but also the visual appeal and general effectiveness of your presentation in conveying the content.
Slides should have no more than 4-6 lines of text per slide, and 1-3 ideas per slide max. Text should be in bullet format, not paragraph/prose format. Information should be conveyed in a concise but comprehensible manner. Do not write too much, as this creates a crowded slide which is visually overwhelming. Your meaning will get lost in the slide and your audience will lose interest. Do not write too little as this makes it difficult to understand your intended meaning. You may receive a lower grade because it will not be clear that you understood the concepts. Use photos and diagrams thoughtfully to supplement and advance your presentations, not just as meaningless filler.
Each presentation should have a title slide, an objectives slide and one or more reference slides. The title slide should contain the title of your presentation, your full name, the date and DMM-649. The objectives slide should outline the main bullet points that your presentation will cover. These should be analogous to lessons you expect your intended target audience to learn from your presentations. Your target audience has a basic disaster management background equivalent to your own. Students will complete two PowerPoint Presentations of 15-20 slides.
This is the Power Point that I did need to edit:

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